I’m pasting it below, but here’s the link to my review page on the Kirkus website. I was so nervous about this review because they are known to be honest and somewhat tough. I was very relieved by my review and surprised there wasn’t more critical feedback! (Keep in mind that I’m deep in editing mode, so I’m finding mistakes everywhere!) I also go back and forth on a daily basis on loving and hating my book. đ đ¤Ş
I’m so excited about this and about winning the award recently. I am now technically an AWARD-WINNING AUTHOR! I’m in a ton of other contests, so I may be a MULTI-AWARD-WINNING AUTHOR in a few weeks or months (or not!). WILD.
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KIRKUS REVIEW- THE DREAMER
A teen and a band of unlikely allies find adventure in outer space in Clearyâs YA novel, the first in a series.
Ash Bennettâs mid-24th-century life is ânomadic,â with her parents often between jobs. Landing on the Martian moon Phobos for supplies changes everything: Someone kills her parents and takes their bodies away, and Ash, to get answers, reluctantly teams up with an 18-year-old stranger, Edan. Heâs been helping twins Isaac and Izzy, who are looking for their own missing parents. The twins are rare âpathersâ; Isaac is an empath, while Izzy is telekinetic. Theyâre like the Mind Squad Agents who helped fight off alien species during a war that saved humanity but not the Earth. MSAs may be the ones abducting pathers, while Edan likely has a bounty on him courtesy of the criminal parents heâs been evading. In any case, he and the twins must leave Phobos; Ash, with piloting skills and her familyâs spaceship, makes an ideal new friend. Meanwhile, Ash, whoâs been having intense dreams of a blue-skinned figure, discovers that she has newfound abilities not unlike a patherâs. The first installment of Clearyâs series is jam-packed with impressive worldbuildingâcharacters visit or hail from various moons in the solar system, and three distinct nonhuman races (all tied to the war) make appearances. The characters have complicated relationships and backstories; the teens and parents have secrets among them, and Ash and Edanâs mutual attraction comes with all sorts of obstacles (âIâd rather be alone,â Ash claims). The teens are capable and work together to great effect, especially when danger is involved. But despite the superbly developed cast, this interstellar narrative barely unfolds. Ash and the others dig up copious mysteries (like one concerning an enigmatic âchosen oneâ), but most are left unresolved; even Isaacâs gift for reading minds usually leads only to more questions. Answers surely await the intrepid teens (and readers) in the sequels.
Indelible characters fuel this deliberately paced but wholly engaging SF story.



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